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NaNo On Tuesday! [Oct. 30th, 2005|04:20 pm]
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Hello there everyone! This is the totally talented Eine_Erotisch_Katze of NaNoWriMo with her own NaNo Journal! Totally Inspired by everluna. :3

My story is called The Kommandant, which almost looks like it's suppose to be serious. But don't be fooled. :D Actually... no... it is pretty serious. :D

Tanja Modrall is second-in-command of the Ninth Reich, a psuedo-Nazi regime hellbent on ridding their world of the foulest label in existance. For more than two and a half years, Tanja has been follow her Fuhrer's orders to a 'T', but this year is Fuhrer Bryan DeVal's last year in command. Enthralled in the heated work of selecting a new Fuhrer, the men and women of the Ninth Reich begin to notice a change in Tanja's duty-harden facade. She has become very moody and quick to judge. What could possibly be bothering the kommandant?


Setting:
A modern-day, medium-sized business town with 100,000+ population. Specifically, the local high school. Yes, the high school. Barnium High School has about 3,000+ students and is located towards the middle of the southern end of the town; on the opposite side of town to it's rival, Galveston High.

Characters:
Main:
Name: Tanja Modrall
Age: 16
Rank: Kommandant, Second-in-Command
Appearance: 5'2", back length black hair, brown eyes, dark skinned. Is average leaning towards being athletic to too skinny.
Personality: Very strict and demanding. Borderlines bitch in the beginning. Slowly becomes softer and more mother-like as graduation gets closer.
Secretly: Enjoys studying anything taboo or abstract (homsexuality and sex, specifically), collects plush animals, likes to be praised by anyone.

Name: Bryan DeVal
Age: 18
Rank: Fuhrer
Appearance: 6'1", medium length blonde hair- which is often cut-, blue eyes, very pale. Very skinny, almost anemic, but quite handsome.
Personality: Stoic and withdrawn when comes to those outside of the Reich. Very intelligent and intellectual. Rarely show any signs of more than two emotions, upset and pleased.
Secretly: Enjoys RPG and FPS style video games, likes to sing in the shower.

Supporting:
Name: Ambrosia Wood
Age: 17
Rank: Grunt
More Info To Come!

The only ones I see at the moment are the problem of changing Tanja from a strict military bitch to a normal high school girl in love; and of keeping the story intertwined with the psuedo-war going on. This is my first 'real life' story, I normally write fantasy, so it'll prove to be something of a challenge.
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Comments:
[User Picture]From: [info]everluna
2005-10-31 12:31 am (UTC)

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I wonder who on Earth those characters could be based on! =o

Sounds verrrry interesting, though :D
[User Picture]From: [info]sennen_midnite
2005-11-04 02:01 pm (UTC)

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Danke danke :D

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