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I Have Never Been Broken, Never Afraid
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| Just Trust Me |
[Oct. 27th, 2008|04:16 pm] |
start- 12:59 AM
"Just trust me." Taloula looked at Lain in disgust. He felt a pang of regret in his chest, knowing he'd not been much nicer than the snarling white tiger upstairs was now. She reluctantly pulled herself onto his back and locked her arms around his neck. The blood running down her leg was soaking into her torn jeans with no haste. Pain was coursing through her with every heartbeat that leaked out more of the precious red fluid.
Lain hoisted her up with no problem, bounding out of the house. He could hear Timmy finally coming to his senses, the great beast rumbling down the hall towards the stairs. A very dusty panic-mode kicked in, the haze of colors blinding him for a moment before his red Lamborghini came into focus. Behind him where two distinct noises, a were-tiger hissing and a female groaning in pain. Taloula's cries were softening, she would faint soon from exhaustion, fear, and pain. In seconds he'd made it to his car, placing the girl gently in the passenger's seat. At some point he'd taken off his shirt and wrapped it around the wound, the cougar only knew this because as they screeched away from the street, his chest was unbearably cold.
The wind was whipping through the half-opened window on his side, only a precaution in case Timmy had managed to get in front of them, but bitterly cold. Lain couldn't see where he was going, but his instinct drove his car safely into the sheltering calm of the Liheaha mansion.
Taloula was still half-conscious by the time he laid her down on his bed. She was mumbling incoherently and shaking violently. Lain was finally starting to calm down, knowing that the tiger could not follow them here; a little hex on the mansion would mix up the scent trail left behind by anyone traveling to it, making anyone who was following behind divert from their intended path. Lain rushed to his bathroom, almost ripping the doors off his medicine cabinet for gauze and antiseptics. When he returned, Raver and Arik were in the room, but he ignored them.
Certainly Arik was asking a million questions, but Lain didn't hear them, nor did he care. Certainly Raver was reprimanding him for not taking proper care of his female, and also for that he didn't care to hear. It wasn't until there was a good six or seven layers of gauze around Taloula's leg did Lain look over his shoulders at his companions. The look on their faces would be priceless, had it been any other time but now. Probably, Lain's face was the picture of horror and anguish.
Shaking there on the floor beside Taloula, Lain laid his head against her side. A heavy sigh was in his throat and an even heavy burden in his heart. Footsteps towards the door told him that Arik and Raver had given up their questioning. There was a long silence, long and gut-wrenching. Taloula's breathing shuddered, slowed, then came back to normal. A gentle hand in Lain's hair brought his gaze up to meet the woman's hazy, tired expression. She opened her mouth to speak, but no words came out. When she tried again, Lain shook his head and nuzzled into her hand, "No, thank you for trusting me..."
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| Outline Sheet One |
[Oct. 18th, 2006|01:42 am] |
14 Days Till :3
Working title: 'A Glitch in the System'
“Type” of novel best suited to this idea: Think V For Vendetta and The Island.
___Mainstream (Describe): (que?)
___Category (Genre): check one (or more, if the idea might cross genre lines).
___Romance ___Western ___Fantasy _x_Action/Adventure
___Mystery ___Horror _x_Science Fiction
___Other Feel free to type in a different genre if you feel yours is missing. Know what readers want to see in a genre before holding yourself down to it.
(Describe):
It’s 2006, or so we believe. The American government has gone insane with power during the War in Iraq and has thusly put the country under permanent arrest beneath holograms of what they believe to be the real world ‘2006’. A group of vigilantes that call themselves ‘the Glitch’ have risen to bring down the government and return American to it’s freedom. Also, the current leader of The Glitch, a woman who calls herself ‘Talon’, is on a personal vendetta to save a boy she once loved.
Main Characters (list only up to three major characters)
Character #1—the protagonist (the hero or heroine of this story)
Name: Tyler ‘Talon’ Monahan
Primary Goal: Destroy ‘The System’ and rescue the boy she loved in her youth.
Most notable personality trait(s): Cunning, loyal, possessive
Character #2—the antagonist (the main “opposition” character)
Name: Tiger
Primary Goal: Take over ‘The System’?
Most notable personality trait(s): Cold, distant, untrusted by all.
Relationship to protagonist: the boy/man Talon is looking for?
Character #3—a major supporting character
Name: Megara Whitmore
Primary Goal: Talon’s lover, her weakness
Most notable personality trait(s): loving, accepting
Relationship to protagonist: lover
Setting(s) (If your novel has multiple settings, list only the two main ones)
Setting #1: Flashbacks, a high school in Texas
Time frame: 2004-2006 false time
Reason for using this setting: So readers may have some insight as to why Talon searches for this boy.
Setting #2: Present day, hologramed Texas
Time frame: 2076 real time
Reason for using this setting: Insight to the battle taking place between the Glitch and the System.
What is the main complication of the story (the central problem that must be solved by the main character)? Get rid of the corrupt government and resolve a lost love.
What are the primary obstacles preventing the main character from achieving his or her goal? Talon loves Meg, sometimes to the point of being too protective to leave for long missions.
How is the story resolved for the main characters (how does it end)? 1) Meg dies and Talon and Tiger get together to rebuild the world. 2) Meg survives and we wait until next NaNo to see what happens. |
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| Kri'i and Lana |
[May. 17th, 2006|07:11 pm] |
Full Name: Kizandal Razun Iragginbal Istovier (Kri’i for short) Teyah
Age: 400+ (app. Age: 20)
Race: Drow
Descent: Nobility and magik
Height: 6’ 3”
Weight: 175 lbs.
Appearance: Kri’i has muscular but lithe build. Has silver hair that comes down to the small of his back with more grayish color bangs that come down around his face to his chin. His eyes are almond shaped and a bright shade of silver to match his hair. There are beautiful, intricate black markings along his back and chest, indicating that he has been marked for greatness by an oracle. His usual attire is his own father’s recruit uniform, comprised of armor plating which he had altered himself. The armor plating covers his shoulders, his crotch, and his shins and feet; chainmail covers his chest and legs beneath a silver, silk shirt and off-white pants.
Personality: Kri’i has a dangerously sarcastic attitude. He likes to make men angry and girls swoon. He knows he’s handsome and does everything in his power to make sure others know too. He isn’t really concerned about his future, and sometimes gives faint signs that he might even fear it.
History: Kri’i was born to a Drow noble named Amalagh (literally ‘holy destroyer’) and an oracle who had forseen his future while giving birth to him. He grew up in a village near the Drow capital after his father retired from the calvary. When he was five, his father left, leaving his mother devastated. It’s then when she began to abuse Kri’i physically and emotionally, but not a lot because she had forseen a glimpse of his importance to Zira. Because of his father’s absence and mother’s abuse, Kri’i developed a dislike for women, but a love for what he saw to be their only purpose. Pleasuring him.
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Full Name: Lana Moringale
Age: 350+ (app. Age: 18)
Race: Elvale
Descent: Nobility and beast
Height: 5’ 2”
Weight: 110 lbs (but can fluctuate proportionally to whatever physical change she goes through)
Appearance: Lana, although at an average weight for her breed, is fairly short compared to other elvales. She has green dragon scales on her ears and can have a tail and/or wings in her elven form. She wears a long beige cloak and hood with a loose green tunic, pants, and brown reptilian scaled boots. Her hair is a light chestnut brown and comes down just above her shoulders and flips out a little. Her eyes are midnight blue and almond-shaped because of her elven heritage. Her body is covered in scars, three on her back for her wings and tail, two on
Personality: Cold and withdrawn. Doesn’t seem to be affected by anything around her, although she does show a bit of emotion when approached by hybrids. Her concept of sex has always been a negative one, and whenever Kri’I brings up his conquests, she snaps at him for being arrogant and sick.
History: Lana was born of a forbidden love during a war on her mother’s half of the Kemma continent. Her mother was killed for treason when Lana was only ten. She escaped from the men who persued her and traveled with only the clothes on her back and a piece of cloth bearing her father’s city’s emblem. She found her father and a surprise. Her father had his own family, one he had started before he met Lana’s mother. Now Lana had two older brothers and a step-mother. Lana’s brothers, Derik and Rowan, were happy to find that they had a little sister they could protect… and use for damsel-rescue practices. Lana’s new mother, Aeleur, however, did not approve. Not only did she hate the fact that her husband had an affair, but the offspring was a magic-using mutt. Lana’s father promised Aeleur that magic was just as useful and had Lana sent off to train to become a mage for the military. Five years later, Lana is own her way home. |
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| Character Thingies For NaNo |
[Feb. 5th, 2006|08:10 pm] |
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| | Super Bowl XL | ] |
This year, I'm going back to fantasy romance. It's what I do. This year's NaNo features Lana Moringale (the second premire Elvale I've written about) and Kri'i Tayah (a sexy drow elf who knows it).
For know, the basic idea is that Kri'i comes across Lana and her horse Starre while on his way home. Intrigued by Lana's calm facade, he decide to offer his companionship to her. From there, crazy stuff happens, because they totally hate each other and stuff. Pivotal moments will be- finding their villages in ruins and the forest-fire scene.
Now for the stuff I came here to write!
( Character: Lana )
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( Character: Krii ) |
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| Wow... I Smell Sex... |
[Nov. 21st, 2005|11:49 am] |
| [ | mood |
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| | Looking Through Your Eyes~ Lee Ann Rhimes | ] |
2,780/50k (I'm a failure)
I redid 'The Induction' with some more detail and such. :\ There's no way I'm gonna be done with this by deadline. Unless I suddenly have a stroke of genius.
( The re-Induction Ceremony )
Damn you, Bryan! You're a Nazi leader! Quit being so damn nice! And YOU, Tanja, stop being so giddy! GAH! |
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| NaNo Filler I |
[Nov. 5th, 2005|09:00 pm] |
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| | Inuyasha | ] |
For Tichan is sehr lazy. Procrastination Productions Presents:
NaNo Filler:: Diabolo: Romance I
Based on the manga I got today, Romance I is about quiet puzzle-master Takeshi Hiwara and the two mistakes she made that ruined her life. One was falling in love with Kojiro Kazuki, and the second was trying to get him to love her back. After her third failed attempt to ask him out, Takeshi searches for where she had gone wrong. What she finds is that a certain someone is in her way. Kakashi Izumi, Kojiro's long-time friend, had a tight hold on Kojiro's heart, even though she doesn't realize it. Determined to make Kojiro hers, Takeshi breaks a third wall on her eve of her 17 birthday. She makes the ultimate deal with Diablo; she will make Kojiro love her in return for two souls, her own and one other.
( Even The Devil Cannot Contain Me ) |
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| Brain Farts |
[Nov. 5th, 2005|12:06 am] |
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| | I Knew I Loved You- Savage Garden | ] |
I've decided to change from a normal high school to a boarding school. My only real excuse for the change is for Tanja to become more desensitized to the idea of PDA, which she hates. With a burning passion.
As for Bryan, who is absolutely awesome. His Kommandant before Tanja actually turned to the Emo side, a fact which causes something of a wall between him and Tanja at times. |
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| AUGH, PITY 4 j00!!! |
[Nov. 4th, 2005|07:41 am] |
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| |  awake | ] |
| [ | music |
| | the classical music & the 3 annoying girls talking around me | ] |
Okay, today's a pep rally day, so I've got a bit more time to update and tell you more about three of our supporting characters, and maybe some insight on Bryan's character.
BTW, I started writing last night, and I'm already 150+ words in. :D Yaye!
( More Character Junk )
Rawr, I wish I was at home, Friday's are not days for school. Honestly. Rawr. ><
<3333 Greg <3333 |
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| We Can't Bake If We're Naked... |
[Nov. 3rd, 2005|10:12 pm] |
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Sorry for the long delay, I've been w/o internet for about a week now, so I'm trying to catch up as best I can, best it's not going so well. :\ Meh. But I do have something awesome to add. Two more characters, that is! :D
Meet:
Adam, my mandatory gay guy, who was only allowed to join the Reich because he shared the same cynical ideas as Tanja and Bryan, just not about the same people.
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Karina, Tanja's ex-girlfriend (Yes, girlfriend), who is always there to support Tanja... uh... yeah... support...
So The Kommandant is pretty controversial, what with blatant Hitler references, homo/bisexuality, sex, drugs, the whole spiel. It's gonna get racy, I can tell. |
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| NaNo On Tuesday! |
[Oct. 30th, 2005|04:20 pm] |
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| | End of The Road- Boyz II Men | ] |
Hello there everyone! This is the totally talented Eine_Erotisch_Katze of NaNoWriMo with her own NaNo Journal! Totally Inspired by everluna. :3
My story is called The Kommandant, which almost looks like it's suppose to be serious. But don't be fooled. :D Actually... no... it is pretty serious. :D
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( A Setting and Some Characters )
( Possible Problems ) |
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